This is great, like the poems I used to read as a kid, if there was a goofy ink drawing it would be vaguely Silverstein-esque. More so the second half than the first... I like the whole poem though, and I am impressed by the variation in tone and style throughout the month. Here is a topic: pebbles.
With a wink and a nod to Ogden Nash, perhaps?
ReplyDeleteThanks for the compliment. It does seem a tad Ogdeny.
DeleteThis was so fun to read in the morning!Oh, to be an otter. . .
ReplyDeleteGlad you liked it!
DeleteOooh, now *that* is a handsome Underwood! Those look great in gloss black and chrome. (:
ReplyDeleteThis is great, like the poems I used to read as a kid, if there was a goofy ink drawing it would be vaguely Silverstein-esque. More so the second half than the first... I like the whole poem though, and I am impressed by the variation in tone and style throughout the month.
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I didn't know there were such a kind of devices in Venezuelle!! :D
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