I love to see the product of kids interacting with typewriters.I also like the hyphens at the beginning of the next line; my oldest brother does that sometimes when he types me a letter, instead of using the margin release. This is an artifact of the manual typewriter.This has been a great series.
Your nieces have unique voices! I'd encourage them both. :-)
A child's imagination - if only we could bottle it! :)
A comment from one of our agents:"I like the cryptic references to US politics. The Secretary of State and a great president mentioned a line apart. Something going on there.Agent Bikethru"